weird ambient song feedback

https://drive.google.com/file/d/12YnbH3pzviX5YXkVtKs8mXW02l5IaDuq/view?usp=sharing

summary

wanted this one short because i was thinking of using it as an interlude or something. written about someone i know. untitled for now. first time producing something other than full band type stuff in logic.

lyrics:

take your time before we coincide

its been a long road

what will it take to get there?

feel the tide, it calls us

to the same place

our intersecting storylines

if i let you inside

would you stay here or would you run away?

questions

are u digging the beat?

do the melodies sound good?

feedback

suicide is a dangerous game to play alone feedback

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NpEYmnDNv3X4eRGnyKDObe2CfLvkNReG/view?usp=sharing

summary

unfinished. planning to rerecord the vox without clipping. written about falling into depression with someone you care about, specifically a partner.

lyrics so far:

your expressionless gaze

im falling into your emptiness

your emptiness

so you wait

for an answer to come

we’re fading as one

so we lay, forever falling into

what we have become

questions

does the mix sound good?

are u digging the effects?

feedback

Untitled black metal song feedback

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kJSyxAAd1qXaR1fL0AXE6TSlVo8GmWJo/view?usp=sharing

Summary

have not recorded anything past the ending but there will be a tempo change and faster sections. heavily inspired by mayhem’s “freezing moon.”

lyrics (so far):

alone in the cold

surrounded by darkness

flames burn but feel so cold

eyeless faces watching me

so distant as if from a dream

Questions

what do u think of the overall mix?

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